Poor font choice.
Appalling drawing. In comparing to bad artworks in e621, they are better than yours.
I would give more if you didn't cut things out.
no matter, grace to help :)
Don't want to hurt your feeling, but a twink XXX movie of similar storyline to your is more exciting to watch.
Overall love it, but the sound is a little bit 'ear scratching' for me as I have to immediately turn down my speaker.
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